Not that anyone cares, but I thought I'd go on a little tangent about the changes being made in CB as I edit/rewrite it.
Names!
Practically everyone has gotten a name change! Yay...? I'm starting to confuse myself, actually. It will be a pain to stop calling people by their old names and switch to the new ones. Since the beginning of the writing, these are the name changes:
Cynan --> Robyn, Cedrin's dad
Aroni --> Evelyn, Cedrin's mom (thank God for that change)
Daere --> Beast (Alaith had too many names)
Ryn --> Marc, Alaith's brother (too many names that had "ren," "rin," and "ryn" in them)
Mabli --> Tarian (family disliked Mabli, and it isn't necessarily pleasant sounding anyway)
No more flower hunts!
Originally, in search for word count and for something that Ced could do, I had him find a book about flowers and go exploring the gardens. This was a good excuse to get him into the gardens, where he and Alaith could hang out together. My sister flew into tirades upon reading those scenes, and the flower hunts have been happily replaced with a more manly pastime: Sword fighting with a suit of armor. Little does Cedrin know that this practice is gearing him up for the climax...
An admittedly 10x more awesome Garan/Cedrin conflict in the city!
My dad had worked out some significant changes in the plot, and the scene reads SO much better now. There is much suspense and sweat on Cedrin's part. Also: Cedrin actually does something fairly clever to cover his tracks.
Looking for a new title, still. I want to rename it before I send it out to the last batch of editors.
On another note, the bloodsugar went over 300 today. Mom didn't make me go back to the ER... but our Endo friend is probably going to say we should. My pancreas is still functioning, to some extent, because the bloodsugar does go down. But it isn't good. I need to call my new Rheum. doctor to see if I can get off these drugs any faster. I'm really sick of all this.
Names!
Practically everyone has gotten a name change! Yay...? I'm starting to confuse myself, actually. It will be a pain to stop calling people by their old names and switch to the new ones. Since the beginning of the writing, these are the name changes:
Cynan --> Robyn, Cedrin's dad
Aroni --> Evelyn, Cedrin's mom (thank God for that change)
Daere --> Beast (Alaith had too many names)
Ryn --> Marc, Alaith's brother (too many names that had "ren," "rin," and "ryn" in them)
Mabli --> Tarian (family disliked Mabli, and it isn't necessarily pleasant sounding anyway)
No more flower hunts!
Originally, in search for word count and for something that Ced could do, I had him find a book about flowers and go exploring the gardens. This was a good excuse to get him into the gardens, where he and Alaith could hang out together. My sister flew into tirades upon reading those scenes, and the flower hunts have been happily replaced with a more manly pastime: Sword fighting with a suit of armor. Little does Cedrin know that this practice is gearing him up for the climax...
An admittedly 10x more awesome Garan/Cedrin conflict in the city!
My dad had worked out some significant changes in the plot, and the scene reads SO much better now. There is much suspense and sweat on Cedrin's part. Also: Cedrin actually does something fairly clever to cover his tracks.
Looking for a new title, still. I want to rename it before I send it out to the last batch of editors.
On another note, the bloodsugar went over 300 today. Mom didn't make me go back to the ER... but our Endo friend is probably going to say we should. My pancreas is still functioning, to some extent, because the bloodsugar does go down. But it isn't good. I need to call my new Rheum. doctor to see if I can get off these drugs any faster. I'm really sick of all this.
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